Creativity (4 pts): 3
Technical Merit (3pts): 2
Adherence To The Assignment (3 pts): 3
Total: 8
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CREEPY!
I have to admit I saw the ending coming.
Good story. Well done.
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Judge C
Aug 16, 2009
Creativity (4 pts): 2
Technical Merit (3pts): 1.5
Adherence To The Assignment (3 pts): 2
Total: 5.5
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Nice title work. You should have controlled the glare in the living room scene. Dialogue delivery slightly stilted. Your "stalkee" should have been a bit more scared, I think. If she's freaked out by her cell phone ringing or texting all the time, why doesn't she turn it off. You never really established the final scene - all the little jars. The roommate went from big sis to Jeffrey Dahlmer in 3 minutes.
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Judge B
Aug 16, 2009
Creativity (4 pts): 3
Technical Merit (3pts): 3
Adherence To The Assignment (3 pts): 3
Total: 9
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Nice title graphics. High quality look and well acted. Creepy story manages to work to a point but falls short of expectations at the end.
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Judge A
Aug 16, 2009
Creativity (4 pts): 2
Technical Merit (3pts): 2
Adherence To The Assignment (3 pts): 2
Total: 6
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r ocallaghan (i Fiction )
Jul 31, 2009
i think it is a splendid piece especially since u choose partofadream !!! such taste ...
all movies should be short !!!
thnx everyone concerned
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Tera Watson
Jul 30, 2009
The only thing that James told me about the movie was that it was a thriller/suspense. Besides the scary guy with the shot...I thought it was very very very good. I really enjoyed it. The main actresses were excellent. The only problem I had was James and his dancing that he did. I can't get him to dance with me, so how did you get him to dance in the movie.
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Liza O Shoning
Jul 29, 2009
The red zone is for immediate loading and unloading of passengers only....
I love it!!! HAHAHA! Although you spelled Blantanly wrong in the credits. ;-) You did a rockstar job. Good job outta all of you!